Taylah: Narrative from Literacy

Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Narrative from Literacy

Narrative

the moment Jess* saw the picture she*

screamed.It was the most horrific view she had ever seen, it was disgusting!. Jess couldn’t even tell what it was. Its face looked like a squirrel and its body was like a really fat pig, rainbow colored skin reflecting off the sun to make it look as shiny as a diamond.Bug Bunny teeth with yellow stains on the tip of each teeth.Its ears were the size of peanuts they were so tiny.His nose was as big as a gigantic balloon blown to its full ability.Jess passed out for a while.

when she finally woke up she closed her eyes and grabbed the picture struggling to get to the kitchen opened the door found the bin and chucked out the picture hoping to NEVER EVER see that picture AGAIN.

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Hi my name is Taylah. I'm a year seven in Room 20. This year my teacher is Ms Squires. My nationality is Maori and Cook Island. I have 2 brothers and 2 sisters. I have 1 older brother and then the rest are younger than me so that makes me the second oldest.

My favorite subject at school is maths. I really like calculating and everything that's why i must like it so much. My favourite thing to do at home is stay outside with my friends on our street but when I'm out there I have to make sure my brother and sisters don't run on to the road and that they stay on the foot path with their toys.