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Monday 1 July 2013

RedRiding Hood Twist


In a world of normalness there are animals that talk just like you and I. Vicious humans that can't talk eat cup cakes and have a really sore bite.

Little Wolf Charlie, so innocent and charming, lived in  a house with her parents and two sibilings.

One day her Granny was very sick. from old age and sickness. She had the flu. She thought, “Who wouldn't get the flu in cold wintery weather like this. It is absolutely treacherous.

Charlie’s mum asked her to take a  basket full of meat to her for a treat to cheer her up. Filling up the basket with everything delicious. Charlie thought to herself, “It's an awful day but i've been stuck in this house for too long”

Charlie was told to stay on the mud do not follow the path as bad things happen when you follow the footpath. She started her journey.

Walking in the murky mud felt slippery and disgustingly cold and wet. One foot after another she felt like there was still miles and miles to go like walking from country to country, although she had never done it felt like that.

STOP NOW “what's in the basket” the horrific looking person said.
“Why do you need to know its not for you anyway and even if it was you would never get it”
“hAHAHA you can't get me”

Running as fast as she could she reached her grandma's house running through the lounge kitchen and hallway. reaching her grandmas room she tells her grandma a list
“ you have little eyes ears mouth and body have you been working out”
“Well yes if that makes you quite and makeS you hurry up and give me that basket you mother has gave you to give to me then YES” the beady eyed human said
“Wait my Grandma would never ever ever say that to
me” Charlie sweetly but harshly said the the beady eyed person
“COP PIGS THIS PERSON IS TRYING TO IMPERSONATE MY GRANDMA”
cop pigs running 1 2 3 with their loaded cream guns no one like cream
“Well i do my favorite thing in the world”
“NOOOOO”

Now i'm going to have a feast on all of you humans
“NUM NUM NUM NUM NUM”

Little charlie was believed to have died and still lays in the stomach of the wolf. They also never lived happily ever after and would never ever ever live happily ever after


Here are some questions we had to do with Mr. Kately after we finished this narrative


similarities


she lived in a house
she was a little girl
she got the name Little Red
Her mum wanted her to visit her grandma
She had to walk through the forest

contrast


She was a difficult kid to handle
She had to get bribed to do things
she had a fiery temper

simariliters


She came across a wolf
She had never seen a wolf in the pines before
She got closer to her grandmas house

contrast

she ate a frozen cheese cake from the basket
dollar signs flashed before her eyes
she had a phone
there was network out there
she thought the  wolf escaped from the zoo  and that there would be a reward
she wasn't scared of the wolf
she's not stupid enough to make the wolf smell the scent of her
wolf doesn't talk
wolf stays alive

similarities
they capture the wolf
its a wolf
she gets chased by the wolf

4 comments:

  1. Hi Taylah,

    I'm just wondering if you had to write a big story like that ?

    I like you big interesting story it made me wonder if I should do something like that.

    I look forward to anther part of your story.

    By Alarzae

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    1. I don't mean I like you it is purposes to be your big interesting story

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  2. Hi Taylah,

    I'm just wondering if you had to write a big story like that ?

    I like you big interesting story it made me wonder if I should do something like that.

    I look forward to anther part of your story.

    By Alarzae

    ReplyDelete

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