The Day Things Started Disappearing
Imagine that things mysteriously start to disappear
One thing disappears, then another, then another
Write to narrate a story about these strange disappearances
What goes missing and why?
What problem is caused and how is it solved?
Think about:
Where your story is set
Who your characters are
The problem and how it is solved
The order of events and how they are linked
Remember to:
Choose words carefully
Take care with punctuation and spelling
Edit - add or delete words, information, sentences to improve your work.
Start Here:
Oh no! here we go another miserable school day.I start to think to myself why do we have school we don't really need it.Just to add to it the work is so easy so why should I have to do and the same with everyone in the school who finds it easy like me.I suppose i'm already here so i should just get on and do it.
Ms Squires Mr Barks and Mrs Nua just walked outside and they never came back i think they have gone missing.Nahh there alright they probably got called to see Mr Burt here why don't you stay here and i go look for them so you can get some learning into that brain.
Ohh hurry up this is taking for ever!.”why don't two year eights just stay here and the rest of the year eight can go look for them?” I suggested.”yep! me and Kayden will go actually we need someone really fast” Rozela said.”Your year eights decide it ok” as i said frustratedly.
“Huhuhuhu there is no teachers in the school all the little kids are going mad they won't listen to settle down” Tevita said barely able to talk.Its like there they are and poof disappeared.What are we going to do.Take all the kids onto the field and play some games the year sixes can watch them and year seven and eight split up into fours and go find the teachers.
“Hehe i bet we got them’’ we heard a voice that sounded like mouse. “What was that noise did you hear it” I told my group.”yes but the thing is it came from the room no one had even been in for over seven years.But we need school and teachers for our learning.the door then swung open. Mrs nua then said “I thought school was miserable and you hated it?” Mrs nua said smartly. “I'm sorry i will never say anything like that again and why did you decide to hide in there its looks so dirty and it stinks” “see we no how to make school fun” A teacher said from the back.
From then on there was no more disappearing teachers and school was so fun.I now no why we have school it is to get a good education.
