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Monday, 1 July 2013

RedRiding Hood Twist


In a world of normalness there are animals that talk just like you and I. Vicious humans that can't talk eat cup cakes and have a really sore bite.

Little Wolf Charlie, so innocent and charming, lived in  a house with her parents and two sibilings.

One day her Granny was very sick. from old age and sickness. She had the flu. She thought, “Who wouldn't get the flu in cold wintery weather like this. It is absolutely treacherous.

Charlie’s mum asked her to take a  basket full of meat to her for a treat to cheer her up. Filling up the basket with everything delicious. Charlie thought to herself, “It's an awful day but i've been stuck in this house for too long”

Charlie was told to stay on the mud do not follow the path as bad things happen when you follow the footpath. She started her journey.

Walking in the murky mud felt slippery and disgustingly cold and wet. One foot after another she felt like there was still miles and miles to go like walking from country to country, although she had never done it felt like that.

STOP NOW “what's in the basket” the horrific looking person said.
“Why do you need to know its not for you anyway and even if it was you would never get it”
“hAHAHA you can't get me”

Running as fast as she could she reached her grandma's house running through the lounge kitchen and hallway. reaching her grandmas room she tells her grandma a list
“ you have little eyes ears mouth and body have you been working out”
“Well yes if that makes you quite and makeS you hurry up and give me that basket you mother has gave you to give to me then YES” the beady eyed human said
“Wait my Grandma would never ever ever say that to
me” Charlie sweetly but harshly said the the beady eyed person
“COP PIGS THIS PERSON IS TRYING TO IMPERSONATE MY GRANDMA”
cop pigs running 1 2 3 with their loaded cream guns no one like cream
“Well i do my favorite thing in the world”
“NOOOOO”

Now i'm going to have a feast on all of you humans
“NUM NUM NUM NUM NUM”

Little charlie was believed to have died and still lays in the stomach of the wolf. They also never lived happily ever after and would never ever ever live happily ever after


Here are some questions we had to do with Mr. Kately after we finished this narrative


similarities


she lived in a house
she was a little girl
she got the name Little Red
Her mum wanted her to visit her grandma
She had to walk through the forest

contrast


She was a difficult kid to handle
She had to get bribed to do things
she had a fiery temper

simariliters


She came across a wolf
She had never seen a wolf in the pines before
She got closer to her grandmas house

contrast

she ate a frozen cheese cake from the basket
dollar signs flashed before her eyes
she had a phone
there was network out there
she thought the  wolf escaped from the zoo  and that there would be a reward
she wasn't scared of the wolf
she's not stupid enough to make the wolf smell the scent of her
wolf doesn't talk
wolf stays alive

similarities
they capture the wolf
its a wolf
she gets chased by the wolf

Prospective Student

Climbing to his full ability with strength fulling bit by bit. The Prospective Student Dangles from the edge of the Cliff finger sipping one finger  buy one,He gets down to his last three fingers and finds the strength to pull himself up. Reaching the top he felt , like he conquered the world, Nothing could stop him now.

Friday, 14 June 2013

William


Will.i.am


Hearing that the kapahaka and hiphop groups were performing for someone very special I was feeling nervous.Thinking to myself "Who could it be out of anyone in the whole wide world".So then the special half an hour assembly came and Mr. Burt told us that it was someone from the “Black-eyed-peas”. So I was guessing that i was going to be “Furgie” but everyone else was thinking it was going to be Will.i.am.


Mr. Burt then showed us the picture and guess who it was
WILL.I.AM. It was a long wait for him to get to school but finally he came. Just after that the kapa haka and hip hop had finished he got up and talked.

He started with his family. His family was very poor and didn't get much income. No one had a job and he his brothers and sisters were raised with no dad.He told us that most people in his neighbourhood would goo to jail. But his music saved his life.

As he grew up his dream job was to be able to look after his mother.All his other friends had the same dream and that was to look after their family and mothers too. Thats how he managed to look after his mother through his music. He also had a dream for a job and it was to do science maths engineering and technology.

Will.i.am also gave a very inspirational talk to the year eight.

He had started a foundation that was called "I Am Angle".

here is the link for things bout the talk.......
http://tvnz.co.nz/entertainment-news/i-am-donates-100-000-nz-children-s-trust-5433031/video?vid=5433336


MONSTER!


Narrative

the moment jess saw the picture she
screamed.It was the most horrific view she had ever seen, it was disgusting!. Jess couldn’t even tell what it was. Its face looked like a squirrel and its body was like a really fat pig, rainbow coloured skin reflecting off the sun to make it look as shiny as a diamond.Bug Bunny teeth with yellow stains on the tip of each teeth.Its ears were the size of peanuts they were so tiny.His nose was as big as a gigantic balloon blown to its full ability.Jess passed out for a while.

when she finally woke up she closed her eyes and grabbed  the picture struggling to get to the kitchen opened the door found the bin and chucked out the picture hoping to NEVER EVER see that picture AGAIN.

Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Narrative from Literacy

Narrative

the moment Jess saw the picture she

screamed.It was the most horrific view she had ever seen, it was disgusting!. Jess couldn’t even tell what it was. Its face looked like a squirrel and its body was like a really fat pig, rainbow colored skin reflecting off the sun to make it look as shiny as a diamond.Bug Bunny teeth with yellow stains on the tip of each teeth.Its ears were the size of peanuts they were so tiny.His nose was as big as a gigantic balloon blown to its full ability.Jess passed out for a while.


when she finally woke up she closed her eyes and grabbed  the picture struggling to get to the kitchen opened the door found the bin and chucked out the picture hoping to NEVER EVER see that picture AGAIN.

Friday, 7 June 2013

rOCKS

placed in the middle of nowhere stands a circle of rocks tall and heavy.no house in sight for miles and miles. Fog covers sight barely able to see. The sound of peace and only able to hear birds chirping. Smelling the air smelling much different to the city, the air is so fresh.

Saturday, 1 June 2013

dIABETES


Diabetes article

What is Diabetes?
Diabetes is often known from doctors as Diabetes Mellitus. What's Mellitus it is the same as Diabetes just a doctors fancy word. Its a sugar imbalance.

Diabetes 1
Type 1 Diabetes, 10% of people that have Diabetes have type 1. So 90% percent have type 2 Diabetes. Most people that get Diabetes type 1 get it when they're young but it can still occur at any age. Type 1 Diabetes is caused by an auto_immune destruction of the insulin produced by the body. So a person diagnosed with type 1 diabetes can still have insulin in their body.

Type 2 Diabetes
One third of the people that have type two Diabetes have not been diagnosed with it. Type 2 Diabetes can occur any age, It can be passed down through the family, but usually doesn’t occur if your diet is low in sugar. Type 2 Diabetes is a metabolic disorder, that means your body isn’t transferring the glucose, which is sugar, in your food into energy properly.

Facts About Diabetes

Did You Know...
That india is the capital of Diabetes, that mean out of all the countries that have Diabetes, there is more people in india that have Diabetes.